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If I
could see the depth
to which your heart extends,
how could I fail to fall in love
with you?

The sword
that pierces soul
and spirit into shards,
You forged it from your breath into
a pen.

It tells
me prophecy
of utter saving grace,
and awed I gaze up to the sky,
silent.

Starry
nights I call to
memory, and all the
world was gleaming, glimmering in
darkness.

When I
recall that night,
I fear no more the day.
With hand in hand we walk, just me
and God.
A cinq-cinquain for #ProjectDFC 2013: fav.me/d6vt97b

I'm giving my life to the only one
Who makes the moon reflect the sun,
Every starry night, that was His design.

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LaBruyere Dec 11, 2013  Student Writer
Love the mood here. And your usual theological accuracy. :)
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