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It Was Done

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He breathed His last in pain, and it was done:
His blood poured down in loving sacrifice.
Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!

His senses He would not consent to stun
With wine that had been laced with gall and spice:
He breathed His last in pain, and it was done.

There was no pain He did not know, not one:
The lash, the mocking word, denial thrice.
Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!

The darkness now in sorrow veiled the sun,
The earth shook as it offered all its vice.
He breathed His last in pain, and it was done.

Thus said the gory, awed centurion
Who placed Him on Rome's cruelest death device:
"Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!"

O death! Your vicious sting has been undone
By Jesus, King of Kings, who paid the price!
He breathed his last in pain, and it was done:
Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!
My first attempt at a villanelle. To be honest, it's not particularly well written because it lacks good enjambment, essential for your villanelles and terzanelles. It came upon me with a good burst of Good Friday inspiration though, so I'll leave it at that.
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sereisa's avatar
It is very good, and I like how you describe the death of Jesus Christ.. :heart: