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Sensing his stillness in the booming of a bass,
Its note replete with richness, hear it roar
A saving storm that brews abuzz with rumbling.
The righteous rains are coming sweet to taste,
Pitter-patter promises, hear them pour
Torrential trust on seasons cracked and crumbling.

The bass, the voices raised, the beating drum,
The coming king will keep our steps from stumbling.
Hear the archangel who comes before
The daybreak bursts in lights, O kingdom come
In thund'rous humbling!
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soulspoken Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Professional Writer
I have had a lot of similar experiences with the music I listen to. I love how it can do that to you! It kind of takes you into a completely different world doesn't it? My favorite bands often make me think about things that normally are not accessible. Love the writing!
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Parsat Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks for the encouragement. :) Any songs or bands you've been liking and listening to lately?
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soulspoken Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Well I've been listening a lot lately to Death Cab for Cutie and Muse. Of course though I am always listening to those bands. Lol
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Parsat Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
My sister likes Muse a lot. To be honest I'm kinda lukewarm toward Muse; I only liked Starlight.
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soulspoken Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Hey it's no problem. :) We all have our tastes and preferences.
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VioletParrNarnia Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
I like the concept
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