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When years pass by and separate our ways,
Would I stay jealous for my sisters' sake?
That none of you should ever fall astray
As Eve was, tempted by that cunning snake!
When joyously I see each of you wed,
I'll pray that you be further sanctified
By Him who to redeem you freely bled
And called you each his own beloved bride:
In jealousy I pray most zealously.
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I'm a day behind for FSC, but I hope to be caught up soon. This is a sonnet petit for #Crowns-of-Sonnets' February Sonnet Challenge. Written with the sisters in my ministry in mind, as well as 2 Corinthians 11:2-3:

"I am jealous for you with a godly jealousy. I promised you to one husband, to Christ, so that I might present you as a pure virgin to him. But I am afraid that just as Eve was deceived by the serpent’s cunning, your minds may somehow be led astray from your sincere and pure devotion to Christ."
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*LaBruyere Feb 11, 2013  Student Writer
Awwwww! I like this. In technique and content.
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*Preach-it Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many stage performers have said it, "Leave them wanting more..." You've succeeded. You've managed to pull in the scripture quite well also. The line, "Would I stay jealous for my sisters' sake?" ,made me pause and contemplate. I'd love for this to be longer but you've got contest rules to consider. Perhaps a revision is in the future?!?
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*Parsat Feb 11, 2013  Student Writer
Haha, well, I've said really all I want to say. I will be content with that. :)
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~xPichuLuvr Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
wow, that's pretty!!
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