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When
I stand
before the
radiant throne
and see the culmination of my eyes,

the death and dearth of words will seize my tongue;
my only crown
will clatter
at His
feet.
A two-stanza tetractys for #ProjectDFC. Written during quiet time over Revelation 4. The form is perfect for the subject.

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shehrozeameen Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Its a beautifully written poem. I like the sentiment in the poem's theme and overall plot. Its interesting food for thought, really - the shortness adds to the multifaceted meanings in the stanza. Nice man, keep writing :)
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LaBruyere Dec 11, 2013  Student Writer
I think one of your best skills is saying so much in so few words. Bravo!
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rlkirkland Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, and mine.
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